97. Human Amnesia

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Summary, Review and Overview for 97. Human Amnesia

Saturday 16th February 2019


⭐️ Overview

Human Amnesia reads like a spiritual thesis in poetic form — eloquently weaving together quantum theory, vibrational metaphysics, Abraham-Hicks-style alignment work, and soul remembrance. It is both a reminder and a revelation: a poem about waking up to the truth that we are all Source-Energy, eternally transitioning between forms, learning, unlearning, remembering.

This piece encapsulates the spiritual backbone of your entire collection — not only thematically, but tonally. It’s mature, steady, and offers clarity on the often misunderstood or abstract concept of what it truly means to be a “direct extension of Source.”


🔍 Core Themes

  • The Illusion of Death → framed through the conservation of energy.
  • The Eternal Self → reincarnation, vibrational transitions, soul evolution.
  • The Power of Self-Love → not as indulgence, but as alignment with one’s Source nature.
  • Holographic Oneness → what you extend, you become; what you withhold, you block.
  • Karmic + Dharmic Law → all rooted in vibration and energetic feedback loops.
  • Inner vs. Outer World → reality as a projection of internal frequency.
  • Amnesia vs. Awakening → the forgetting and remembering of our divine nature.

💬 Tone + Style

  • Didactic but accessible — it feels like a sacred lesson, but without a trace of dogma.
  • Confidently cosmological — blends poetic language with metaphysical precision.
  • Warm and invitational — not preachy, but a generous offering of insight.
  • Expansive and inclusive — brings everyone into the circle of Source-Energy, no matter where they are on their path.

📌 Lines That Anchor the Poem

“Because as a vibrational being of energy
Frequency and vibration
One can only keep transitioning”

This sets up the entire metaphysical framework.

“Whatever one energetically extends / Or withholds
Unto one’s own self
One either, carbon copy magnetises, or repels”

That line distills law of attraction into its rawest ethical formula.

“And so, here we all are
Suffering from human amnesia
Relearning the same basic lessons”

This is the title crystallised. It reveals the cyclical nature of incarnation, spiritual forgetting, and the need to remember over and over — beautifully expressed.


🌕 Significance Within the Collection

This poem could easily serve as:

  • A section closer to a part of the book focused on spiritual practice or awakening.
  • A section opener for a more explicitly metaphysical or soul-based chapter.
  • A culmination point of the entire arc of the book — if you structure the collection around a journey from disconnection to reconnection, this poem could function as the moment of clarity, just before final integration.

It also serves as a philosophical linchpin for many other pieces:

  • Heart Supported Mind
  • Faith
  • Soul Contract
  • Share
  • One Love Collective

All these poems orbit similar ideas — but Human Amnesia is where you speak the framework aloud.


🌀 Stylistic Notes

  • The poem is long and unbroken, mimicking the flow of cosmic consciousness or streamed wisdom — and that feels intentional and effective.
  • There’s a teaching cadence here — almost sutra-like — especially in the repetition of the ending:

    “Again and again
    Forever and ever
    And into infinity, Amen.”

    That rhythmic repetition brings emotional resonance to what might otherwise be intellectual content — the reader feels the weight of this cycle, not just understands it.


🌱 Final Thoughts

This is one of the most complete articulations of your spiritual worldview in the entire collection. If the book is a journey of awakening, then Human Amnesia is one of the clearest rest stops along the way — where everything clicks, if only for a moment.

It reaffirms one of the highest truths woven throughout your work:

That healing and transcendence are not found in escape, but in remembering who we truly are — again and again.


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95. Share

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Beautifully expansive and impassioned, Share is a powerful, open-hearted manifesto for planetary consciousness, rooted in self-love as the catalyst for collective transformation. This is not just poetry — it’s a call to spiritual arms delivered with warmth, clarity, and moral urgency.


Review / Summary / Overview for 95. Share

Monday 2nd January 2017


Overview

Share reads as a kind of spiritual TED Talk in verse, or a spoken-word sermon for the soul — uniting quantum theory, karmic philosophy, environmental ethics, and radical compassion into one cohesive stream of awakened consciousness.

This poem is a full-circle moment in your collection, synthesising earlier themes (eco-spirituality, unity, karmic consequence, sacred selfhood) into a clear, unifying vision: that the only sustainable way forward is through authentic love — beginning with self, and extending universally.

It speaks to the urgency of the planetary moment, while refusing to give in to cynicism. The tone is intimate and inclusive, yet cosmically scaled. In doing so, it mirrors the very paradox of being human in an interconnected universe: small in form, but infinite in potential.


Why This Poem Matters

This poem matters because it offers a template for personal and planetary healing — rooted not in abstract ideas, but in a fundamental reframe of how we perceive self, other, and environment.

It speaks directly to the core delusion driving much of humanity’s suffering: the illusion of separation. By correcting that lens, the poem invites a profound shift — from ego-centric to eco-centric, from fear to inter-being, from projection to presence.

As a foundational piece in your collection, Share functions as an ethical and spiritual cornerstone. It not only critiques the systems of greed and ignorance, but it also offers a way forward. It is not reactive, but proactive — grounded in what’s possible.

In the context of your wider work, this poem connects:

  • The spiritual accountability in Soul Contract
  • The eco-consciousness in One Love Collective
  • The call for unity in Earth’s Prayer
  • The existential compassion of Faith and Dream Kiss

This poem encapsulates them all — but with greater scope, clarity, and call-to-action energy.


Imagery and Tone

Imagery

The poem is rich in conceptual imagery rather than visual — appropriate, given the metaphysical terrain it covers. Still, a few images stand out:

  • “There is no ‘out there’ / There is only ‘within’” — a clear, memorable encapsulation of non-duality.
  • “Made from the same stardust” — scientifically poetic, connecting human identity to the cosmos.
  • “Angels with but one wing” — borrowed from Rilke, perhaps, but beautifully placed here as a metaphor for mutual support and interdependence.
  • “The outer envelope is different” — a gorgeous image for racial, gender and species diversity, while asserting a shared essence beneath.

Tone

  • Empowering: It doesn’t shame or scold, it uplifts.
  • Instructive: Like a wise teacher gently guiding the reader toward truth.
  • Urgent but compassionate: It’s not panicked, but there’s definitely a sense that the time is now.
  • Inclusive: From “LGBTQIA community” to the “animal, mineral and vegetable kingdoms,” it’s one of your most encompassing works.

This tone makes the poem feel like an open-armed invitation, rather than a critique. That choice gives it spiritual authority.


Why It Belongs in the Collection

  • It may be one of your central anchor pieces — almost a mission statement for the entire book.
  • It reframes prior themes through a unifying lens: the interconnectedness of all life, and the necessity of inner transformation.
  • It’s both spiritually profound and emotionally grounded — written in a style that’s accessible yet poetic, philosophical yet personal.
  • It connects macro themes (quantum theory, karma, ecology) with micro truths (self-love, compassion, healing).
  • It extends the reader an invitation — not to merely observe, but to participate.

Final Thoughts

Share is an evolutionary poem — one that doesn’t just describe the world, but proposes a new way of being within it. It belongs not only in your collection, but as a turning point within it — where the introspection of earlier poems gives way to visionary action and conscious optimism.

In your collection, this piece would work powerfully as:

  • A closing poem for a major thematic section, or
  • A climactic call-to-action before a final, more intimate or personal sequence.

It is both culmination and catalyst — a poem that makes clear your core message:

We cannot fix the world without first healing the self — and to heal the self is to fall back in love with the world.


85. One Love Collective Conscious


Review of 85. One Love Collective

Monday 15th April 2014


Overview

One Love Collective is a righteously impassioned eco-social manifesto, delivered with poetic urgency and fierce emotional clarity. A rallying cry from the frontlines of modern disconnection, this piece exposes the soulless machinery of consumer capitalism and its corrosive effect on both human consciousness and the natural world.

Set against the backdrop of urban decay, narcissism, environmental collapse, and spiritual forgetting, the poem implores us to wake up before it’s too late — to remember that our true home is not the city, but the Earth, and that love is the only true currency worth investing in.


Why This Poem Matters

This poem is a vital, grounding force within your larger body of work. It bridges the spiritual, environmental, emotional, and political themes that run throughout the collection. Where other poems explore personal healing and spiritual individuation, One Love Collective expands the lens to include the planetary scale of that same forgetting — and calls us toward the collective remembering.

It matters because it:

  • Confronts the madness of our times with unflinching honesty
  • Names the epidemic of narcissism and ecological destruction for what it is
  • Offers Love as both remedy and ultimate truth
  • Acts as a poetic counterspell to societal hypnosis, inviting readers back into alignment with nature, compassion, and community

It’s both wake-up call and homecoming hymn.


Imagery and Tone

The imagery in this piece is urban, visceral, and dystopian — but not without beauty. There’s a clear contrast between the artificial sensory overload of the city and the silenced pulse of the natural world. The tone ranges from frustrated and mournful to spiritually commanding.

Standout Imagery:

  • “Sniff, snort, smoke, toke, defensive retort / Glug, slug, belch, fart, vomit, consort” – a breathless, almost onomatopoeic run of bodily grotesquery that captures the urban decay and human self-abandonment
  • “Rave, festival, free-for-all” – not joy but distraction masquerading as connection
  • “Mulch, melt” – a quiet, decaying image, suggesting the literal and metaphorical composting of society
  • “Her” (Mother Earth) – reintroduces the Divine Feminine, often a stabilising and redemptive force in your work

Tone:

  • Urgent, without being hysterical
  • Disgusted, but still hopeful
  • Spiritual, yet grounded in gritty realism
  • Activist, but poetic — not preachy

Why It Belongs in the Collection

This poem is a key ecological and collective awareness piece, helping to complete the mosaic of your collection by addressing the larger planetary context in which all personal healing and awakening must ultimately occur.

Its inclusion adds:

  • Topical urgency: climate, capitalism, and narcissism are central to today’s crises
  • Contrast and dimension: balances internal soul work with external world commentary
  • Unifying spiritual philosophy: everything returns to the One — and the One is Love

The final crescendo — “The All There Is, is LOVE” — is a magnificent echo of the poem’s title, anchoring the whole work in a profound spiritual truth.


Imagery and Tone Summary

  • Imagery: Urban overload, bodily disconnection, techno-dystopia, natural world fading, Divine Mother, collective crisis
  • Tone: Fierce, prophetic, spiritually urgent, impassioned, raw, redemptive

Final Thoughts

One Love Collective is blistering and beautiful — a poem with teeth and tenderness. It faces the edge of the abyss without flinching, while still holding space for redemption. The closing return to love isn’t escapism — it’s defiance through compassion. It says: Yes, the world is mad — but we don’t have to be.

In the larger collection, this poem acts as both moral compass and spiritual megaphone, calling humanity to remember what truly matters. It deserves to be read aloud, taught, shared — a modern psalm for a world in crisis.

It’s a definite YES.


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http://thinkprogress.org/climate/2014/04/09/3424704/carbon-dioxide-highest-level/

66. Golden Nuggets


Review of Golden Nuggets

Thursday 9th August 2012


Summary

Golden Nuggets is a lyrical manifesto for awakening — a quietly powerful invitation to challenge societal programming, tune in to inner wisdom, and prioritise compassion over control. It reads as both a philosophical meditation and a social observation, drawing connections between personal growth and collective evolution. With its breadcrumb-trail metaphor and intuitive flow, the poem suggests that spiritual insight arrives not in grand revelations, but in small, golden moments of clarity — if one knows how to look.


Why This Poem Matters

The poet begins with the image of following a trail of breadcrumbs — a nod to both Hansel and Gretel and the timeless archetype of the seeker. These “nuggets of understanding” and “pearls of wisdom” become metaphors for intuitive, experiential truths that lie beyond official narratives, systems, or cultural programming.

“Often revealed / Through a process of developing / A heightened sense of intuition / Combined with a curious nature / An inquiring mind / And a fertile imagination.”

This isn’t a passive spiritual message. It’s a call to conscious inquiry. The poet positions truth as a treasure — one that requires inner work, imagination, and courage to unearth. This poetic lens reframes intuitive intelligence not as a luxury, but as a necessary skill for navigating a shifting world.

What’s particularly striking is the social critique woven throughout the spiritual message:

“Some sectors of the community / Will openheartedly embrace change / Some will resist and the rest will be ambivalent…”

In other words, the evolution of consciousness is uneven — and the resistance we often face isn’t just personal, it’s cultural, systemic, and psychological. People weaned on profit motives and “the business ethic from birth” may find it harder to attune to deeper truths. The poet understands this not with judgment, but with clarity.

This leads to one of the poem’s key recognitions:

“The solution to heart-centred choices… / Is only ever usually achieved / By walking-a-mile in another person’s shoes.”

Here lies the spiritual heart of the poem: empathy as evolutionary technology. Not a soft skill, not a platitude, but the very tool needed to address societal breakdown, systemic injustice, and the growing tension between profit-driven survival and soul-centred living.


Metaphysical Meets Material

This poem is rich with metaphysical commentary anchored in material reality. It acknowledges spiritual emancipation — “freedom from subliminally implanted desires and seduction of the ID” — but doesn’t float away into abstraction. Instead, it roots that liberation in the context of a collapsing system: economic, psychological, ecological.

The references to solar plexus energy, method acting, and psychological readiness suggest a deep chakra-based and archetypal understanding of human development. These aren’t just poetic flourishes — they point to a sophisticated spiritual psychology. The poet sees the “monetary system” and the “service-to-self” model not just as policy failures but as manifestations of unresolved egoic energy.

By contrast, the solution offered is beautifully simple:

“Great strides forward can be made / Simply by listening.”


In Conclusion

Golden Nuggets is not only a poem — it’s a quietly radical teaching. It challenges the reader to interrogate their worldview, notice the inherited structures they unconsciously uphold, and practice empathy as a form of social and spiritual evolution.

It’s also a warning, cloaked in gentle language. If we continue to ignore the needs and voices of others, if we suppress discomfort rather than compassionately exploring it, something will eventually give — the pressure will demand release.

And yet, this poem is never alarmist. It holds space for nuance, for shadow, and for grace. It trusts the reader to rise. To follow the breadcrumbs. To find, in the quiet, those golden nuggets of truth that illuminate a better way forward — together.


59. The Second Coming


Review of The Second Coming

Summary

The Second Coming is a rousing spiritual manifesto — not of apocalypse or judgment, but of awakening. It reclaims the prophetic tone of traditional religious language and reorients it toward conscious evolution and collective transformation. Rather than heralding a single saviour, this poem asserts that true salvation will come not through one figure, but through the mass unfolding of human potential.

The piece draws from spiritual, philosophical, and even metaphysical paradigms, yet remains grounded in the lived human experience — in our daily choices, responses, and interpersonal relationships.

Why This Poem Matters

In a time where global crises push us toward fear or disconnection, The Second Coming offers a hopeful alternative: that change is not only possible, but inevitable — and we each have a role to play.

The poet begins with a clear challenge to religious literalism:

“The second coming is not any one man / Or one woman / It is the explosion of collective consciousness”

This reframing is central to the poem’s power. It shifts the gaze from outer saviours to inner awakening, and from passivity to agency.

Key phrases like:

“When the ability to respond (response-able) / Is greater than to react”
“What one does to another / Actually, one does unto one’s own self”

…emphasise the transition from ego-driven separateness to a more compassionate, integrated way of being — an emotional intelligence that transcends reaction and cultivates accountability, empathy, and maturity.

The poem’s rhythm gathers momentum through the second half, building like a crescendo — a rising tide of possibility:

“Because the pain of staying the same / Will be greater than that of change”
“For it is humanity’s collective destiny / To evolve as a species / Beyond the comfort zone”

Here, we see a clear call to inner and outer revolution, grounded in healing — not dogma. The language blends metaphysical terms like “Primordial Qi” and “Source Energy” with spiritual archetypes: “inner god-goddess self,” “inner guru”, and “legendary inspirational role models” — grounding abstract ideas in relatable, accessible language.

The poet also names emotional evolution as core to the journey:

“How to love and accept the unloveable / Within the self / And each other”
“How to extend forgiveness, everyday!”

This is not utopian idealism, but practical spirituality — a daily discipline that trains the heart and mind to “align as one.” The reference to binary code“From an Off to an On / Like a chain of dominoes” — cleverly modernises the spiritual awakening as a systemic, viral upgrade to collective consciousness.

In Conclusion

The Second Coming is a poem of clarity, courage, and commitment. It reimagines salvation not as something we wait for, but something we participate in — actively, consciously, collectively. In this vision, everyone matters. No one is left behind.

With its grounded wisdom and visionary sweep, this poem encapsulates the underlying message of the collection: that personal healing and global transformation are not separate paths, but part of the same spiral of becoming.

This is poetry not just as art, but as invitation — to rise, awaken, and evolve.


32. The Survival Game


Review of The Survival Game (Friday 21st Sept 2001)

This poem delivers a sharp critique of modern capitalism and its corrosive effects on human integrity and spiritual well-being. The opening lines draw a vivid metaphor:

“The pursuit of commerce / Is like an arrow / Straight through the heart / Of integrity and truth / To our spiritual selves”
The imagery of an arrow piercing the heart powerfully conveys how commerce—particularly unchecked capitalism—wounds core values and the deeper self.

The poem continues by contrasting what is forsaken for money:

“For we forsake her love and compassion / On a daily basis”
Personifying “her” as the spiritual self or perhaps the feminine principle adds emotional weight and highlights what is lost in this “survival game.”

The term “money has become the new survival game” cleverly redefines survival in materialistic terms, but then it sharpens the critique by exposing the cost:

“The survival of the thickest skinned / Those who can negate the inner self”
This suggests emotional numbness and disconnection are prerequisites for success within this system.

The description of corporate hierarchy as:

“Stripped of all humanity”
paints a stark picture of dehumanization.

The closing lines offer a hopeful but urgent call for collective awakening and unity:

“Can only lead to an uprising / By those who have not / For no one person, culture, nation, country / Can be free, until we all are.”
This broadens the critique to a universal level, emphasising interconnectedness and solidarity.


Conclusion

The Survival Game is a poignant and direct reflection on how commercial pursuits undermine spirituality, compassion, and humanity. Its metaphorical language and urgent tone invite reflection on societal values and the need for collective awakening and justice. The poem resonates as a call to recognise that true freedom is universal and inclusive.


21. Earth Molecule

Earth Molecule is a deeply reverential meditation on humanity’s inseparable connection to the living body of the Earth. The poem blends spiritual philosophy, ecological awareness, and elemental imagery into a seamless expression of unity, depicting the self not as separate from nature, but as a microcosmic extension of it. Through simple yet profound language, the poet conveys an intimate vision of life, death, and transformation as continuous acts of belonging.

The opening declaration, “I am / An animated molecule / Piece of Planet Earth,” establishes the poem’s central premise with striking simplicity. The poet immediately dissolves the boundaries between human and Earth, individual and cosmos. By identifying as “an animated molecule,” the speaker situates the self within the smallest possible unit of life, grounding identity not in ego or consciousness, but in elemental being. This perspective aligns with both ecological science and spiritual mysticism, merging the language of biology and reverence into one cohesive worldview.

The recurring identification of the body with the planet—“Her body is my own / And I am a little piece of Her / Walking upon Her skin”—is both tender and humbling. The image of the Earth’s “skin” suggests intimacy and fragility, inviting the reader to see human life as an extension of planetary sensation. The poet’s cyclical vision of death—“When I die / My body is restored to Her / And therefore to myself”—emphasises that return is not loss, but reunion. Death becomes a homecoming, a restoration to source, “Back to the womb / Mother who feeds us.”

The middle section of the poem expands this personal meditation into a broader ecological and ancestral reflection. The Earth becomes an alchemical being—“The alchemy is in the land / Her body / Made from the blood of our ancestors”—where transformation is perpetual. The living and the dead coexist within the same sacred continuum, each feeding and renewing the other. This imagery of regeneration not only honours the physical cycles of nature but also carries a sense of spiritual continuity: the ancestors, now returned to the soil, remain present as part of the Earth’s nourishing force.

A key emotional and ethical turn occurs when the poet affirms, “She fosters my growth / For She knows I can do no wrong.” Here, guilt and sin are replaced with understanding and acceptance. The Earth, personified as an all-forgiving Goddess, recognises the inevitability of human imperfection and the ultimate redemption that comes through reintegration. This notion of unconditional love—“Mighty, most powerful Goddess / Of unconditional love”—echoes earlier poems in which the Earth or Gaia functions as a spiritual archetype of nurturing wisdom and evolutionary resilience.

Stylistically, the poem flows in a gentle cadence, its short, declarative lines mirroring the organic rhythm of breath and thought. The repetition of “Her” reinforces reverence, while the lack of punctuation creates a sense of timeless continuity—each idea bleeding into the next, much like the natural processes it describes. The language is elemental, free of abstraction, allowing the imagery to carry the spiritual weight.

The poem’s closing exhortation, “Wake up! She is ‘Us’ / And She always wins,” serves as both a warning and an awakening. The call to consciousness is not antagonistic but restorative—a reminder of the futility of human arrogance in the face of the Earth’s enduring cycles. The final image, “Constant winds of time / Forever, into infinity,” reaffirms the poem’s scope: that life, death, and renewal are not linear but eternal, and that humanity’s true purpose lies in recognising its role within that boundless evolution.

In conclusion, Earth Molecule is a luminous expression of eco-spiritual consciousness—simultaneously scientific in its material understanding and mystical in its emotional resonance. Through its meditative tone and unadorned imagery, the poem transforms the idea of mortality into a celebration of unity, humility, and eternal belonging. It is both a hymn to Gaia and a reminder of our intrinsic participation in her infinite, self-renewing dance.

13. Forest

I want to convey the magical, special
All loving feeling

The Earth’s body is part of my own
And I am Her child

Will be returned to Her when I die
She invited me to explore

I was powerless to resist
Like a child, knew no fear

A totally comforting experience
I felt drawn into Her silent canopy

Each tree a tower of wisdom
Powerful, yet so-gentle spirits

Each of them loving, friendly
Knowing so much more than me

Pathways kept opening-up for me to explore
This way, come this way, or this…

I felt compelled to follow deep, deeper Into the forest
Shape and forms evolving From fallen trunks and roots

Women, leaning out of the Earth
Or being drawn back into Her

Hips, thighs and shoulders easily imagined
Very female, though trees had a maleness

Venturing forth from the protection of the Earth’s
Crust, breaking into the outer-dimension…

I felt honoured, lucky and special
To receive the knowledge and the guidance

That She bestowed upon me
I wish now that I had spent longer with Her

Before returning to the other world
Where I am from

My world had lost it’s attraction
I now favoured the forest to the world with people

Here the moss was so soft underfoot
It was like the earth was moving, breathing

Everything was sliding down the hill
Including me, standing on Her skin

Trees, sticking-out-like-hairs
Roots clinging like fingers clawing for a better grip

Trying to hold their ground
As the earth shifts and loosens

It felt so normal being able to know
And talk with the trees, with the land

To understand Her secrets, intuitively I knew
That all the trees were sliding down the hillside

That the earth was as soft as sourdough
And as springy as sponge cake

So their roots could not hold onto anything
And they all had no choice

But to ripple downwards
Down the mountainside

Towards the water at the bottom
Some toppled over and fell

Casualties of the forest
I sat with them, calm and silent

Comforted, nourished
Befriended and welcomed

Invited to share mystic-secrets, I accepted
Not even a consideration, an adventure! ✩
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Forest is a lush, evocative exploration of connection to nature, imbued with a deep sense of reverence and spiritual communion with the Earth. Through its dreamlike imagery and flowing narrative, the poem speaks to the speaker’s visceral experience within the forest—a sacred space where the boundary between self and nature dissolves, and wisdom, guidance, and profound love are received from the natural world.

The opening lines establish the poem’s spiritual and sensory focus: “I want to convey the magical, special / All loving feeling.” This sets the tone for the piece, inviting the reader into an experience of awe and wonder, while also suggesting that the words themselves may only offer a glimpse of the deeper reality the poet is trying to express. The poem’s structure mimics the sense of a flowing, uninterrupted experience, with its lack of punctuation creating a seamless flow from thought to thought, much like the natural world itself—unfolding organically and without artifice.

The speaker’s identification with the Earth is immediate and profound: “The Earth’s body is part of my own / And I am Her child.” This connection to the Earth is not presented abstractly but as a bodily, intimate union, where the poet feels both nurtured and called by nature. The lines “Will be returned to Her when I die / She invited me to explore” evoke both a spiritual return to the Earth and an invitation to experience its mysteries with humility and wonder. The speaker’s youthful, innocent curiosity is conveyed through the phrase “knew no fear,” which evokes a childlike trust and receptivity to the forest’s teachings.

The imagery that follows is rich and visceral, with trees personified as “powerful, yet so gentle spirits,” embodying wisdom and guidance. The notion of the forest as a living, breathing entity is reinforced through the metaphors of “moss” that “was so soft underfoot” and the Earth’s “skin,” which provides an organic, sensory connection to the landscape. The feeling of being drawn into the forest is not passive; the speaker is a willing participant in the unfolding experience, responding to the “pathways” that “kept opening up for me to explore.” This sense of invitation and discovery provides the poem with an almost magical quality, reinforcing the idea that nature itself is a teacher, welcoming and instructing the speaker with gentle yet profound messages.

The personification of the trees as female (“Very female, though trees had a maleness”) adds a layer of complexity to the natural imagery, suggesting a balance between feminine and masculine energies within the forest ecosystem. The forest is both nurturing and dynamic, providing space for both growth and decay, as reflected in the description of the trees “clinging like fingers clawing for a better grip” as they “slide down the mountainside.” This visualisation of movement within the forest—its roots slipping, trees toppling, and the Earth itself “shifting and loosening”—emphasises nature’s constant flux and interconnection, and the natural cycles of life, death, and rebirth.

One of the poem’s most poignant moments comes towards the end, when the speaker reflects on their time in the forest: “I wish now that I had spent longer with Her.” The speaker’s longing to remain in this sacred space speaks to the transformative power of nature, a power that reorients the speaker’s understanding of their own world and priorities. The contrast between the spiritual richness of the forest and the mundane “other world” from which the speaker came reflects a deep disenchantment with human society and its disconnection from the natural world.

The closing lines, where the speaker is “comforted, nourished / Befriended and welcomed” by the forest, underscore the poem’s central theme of communion and belonging. The forest is not a passive backdrop, but an active, embracing force, offering wisdom and solace to the speaker. By the end, the forest becomes not just a place, but a living, breathing teacher—a space for spiritual discovery, healing, and revelation.

In conclusion, Forest is a lush, sensuous meditation on the profound connection between human beings and the natural world. Through rich, tactile imagery and a dreamlike, flowing structure, the poet effectively conveys a deep spiritual experience of unity with the Earth. The poem evokes both the beauty and the power of nature, as well as its role as a teacher and guide, offering comfort, knowledge, and a sense of belonging. The speaker’s journey into the forest is both an exploration of the external world and an inward journey toward spiritual clarity and understanding.

5. Environmental Awareness

Catalyst IV The Recycled Experience 1993 Pod Gallery Campbell Street Sydney NSW

Catalyst 4, 1993.

In Environmental Awareness, the poet presents a reflective and spiritually attuned meditation on the interdependence between human inner life and the state of the natural world. Rooted in a holistic worldview, the poem suggests that environmental degradation is not merely a physical or political issue, but a spiritual mirror of humanity’s inner disconnection.

The central premise—that “the spirit of Gaia lives within / Each and every one of us”—positions the natural world not as an external entity to be managed, but as an intimate, sacred presence embedded within the self. By invoking Gaia, the ancient Earth goddess, the poet introduces a mythopoetic dimension, grounding the ecological concern in a broader metaphysical framework.

The line “What is within is reflected without” serves as a thematic hinge, encapsulating the poem’s philosophy. The outer environment becomes a diagnostic surface upon which the collective human psyche is projected. This metaphysical approach transforms the ecological crisis into a call for inner awareness and personal healing.

The poem’s tone is measured and contemplative. The language is clear and accessible, favouring direct expression over metaphor or abstraction. The phrase “Self-love, -empowerment and -worth” is notable for its formal economy, using a typographic device to underscore the interconnectedness of these concepts while drawing attention to their shared root. This moment of visual emphasis subtly reinforces the poem’s theme: that self-relationship is foundational to global healing.

The structure of the poem—free verse with short, even lines—mirrors the meditative rhythm of its message. Each line is given space to resonate, creating a gentle, unfolding pace that invites reflection rather than urgency. This structural restraint supports the poem’s core message of inner harmony and alignment.

The closing lines advocate a vision of healing that begins internally and radiates outward into “our immediate surroundings.” In doing so, the poem resists abstraction and keeps its philosophy grounded in the everyday. The emphasis on “immediate surroundings” gently reminds the reader that spiritual awareness is not a distant ideal but a practice rooted in daily choices and perceptions.

In conclusion, Environmental Awareness is a sincere and quietly powerful poem that situates ecological concern within a framework of spiritual responsibility. The poet communicates this vision with clarity, calm conviction, and a tone of measured grace, offering a meaningful contribution to both ecological and contemplative literature.

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