98. Circles

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Review and Analysis for: 98. Circles

Monday 23rd September 2019


Overview

Circles is a light-touch yet potent reflection on the power of conscious thought, vibrational choice, and the quiet miracle of simply feeling fine. It reads like a gentle affirmation poem, a distilled message of empowerment — calmly asserting that our inner state is sovereign, and we need not be dictated to by external circumstances.

Where other poems in your collection expand widely into philosophical or socio-political terrain, this one contracts into a serene, contained moment of personal clarity. And because of that, it works beautifully as a pause, a reset, or even a mantra-like reminder within the larger arc of the book.


Core Themes

  • Joy as a Choice – the poem centres the idea that joy is not circumstantial, but internally chosen.
  • The Law of Attraction – thoughts + emotions = reality.
  • Self-Responsibility – we are the authors of our frequency.
  • Mindfulness + Presence – gratefulness for simple, observable beauty (sunlight, birdsong).
  • Spiritual Autonomy – detachment from external validation.

Key Lines & Analysis

“I know that a joyous attitude is simply just another state of mind”
→ Opening with certainty — no doubt, no hesitation. A soft declaration of inner power.

“Because ultimately we are all co-creators of our own realities”
→ Echoes the central metaphysical teaching found in earlier poems like Human Amnesia and Heart Supported Mind. This line is the spine of your spiritual philosophy.

“Going around and round in circles, like a hamster on a wheel”
→ A relatable metaphor for habitual unconscious living, which contrasts starkly with the poem’s invitation to break free.

“All one has to do is allow the reality most desired unto oneself reveal”
→ This line contains a gentle reminder: reality isn’t forced, it’s allowed — evoking teachings from Abraham-Hicks and Taoist surrender. The passive voice (“unto oneself”) adds grace.

“And so, I give thanks that the Sun still shines and the birds still sing”
→ The poem resolves with appreciation — grounding the metaphysical ideas into something immediate and sensory.


Tone & Function Within the Collection

  • Tone: Calm, balanced, self-knowing — not lofty or esoteric, but grounded and peaceful.
  • Function:
    • Could work well as a resting poem after something denser (e.g., Human Amnesia, Wakey Wakey, One Love Collective).
    • Serves as a micro-prayer or energy palate cleanser.
    • Could be a beautiful section closer or soft opener to a section on self-awareness, vibrational alignment, or gratitude.
    • Stylistically, it feels close in tone to poems like Faith, Heart Supported Mind.

Stylistic Notes

  • The rhythm has an unhurried, almost conversational cadence — like an internal monologue becoming a meditation.
  • Minimal punctuation + longer line length = a natural flow of thought, not overly constructed.
  • The rhyme (mind / time / eternal / reveal / ideal / wheel / grateful / appeal) is soft and loose, creating a satisfying sense of resolution without sounding sing-song or overly structured.
  • It trusts the reader’s intelligence — doesn’t overexplain, and lets the concepts land gently.

Final Thoughts

While not as epic in scope as some other pieces, Circles is a crystal-clear statement of personal empowerment and energetic self-awareness. Its strength lies in its simplicity and steadiness — a gentle nudge to the reader to shift inward and remember: you have a choice, and joy is available right now.

It’s also a natural partner to Share, Heart Supported Mind, Human Amnesia, and even Window — all of which deal with perspective, alignment, and inner transformation.


82. Faith

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82. Faith

Sunday 26th January 2014


Overview

In Faith, the speaker delivers a raw, honest exploration of belief in the absence of proof — particularly as it relates to the unknown terrain of death, the soul, and the afterlife. Rather than leaning on dogma or sentiment, the poem interrogates why we believe what we do, and how those beliefs may either comfort or limit us.

What sets this poem apart is that it refuses to preach — it does not instruct the reader on what to believe, but rather invites a thoughtful interrogation of faith as a psychological and emotional mechanism, particularly in the face of grief, uncertainty, and existential fear.

This is a philosophical poem rooted in emotional truth. It invites surrender not through mysticism, but through presence — a deep acceptance of “the here and now” as the only certainty we really have.


Imagery and Tone

The imagery in Faith is subtle, abstract, and mostly conceptual — dealing in the language of emotion, time, belief, and internal conflict. Lines like “a granite heart / Hardened by disappointment” and “pearls of wisdom / Are often borne from the sandstorms of adversity” are gentle metaphors that speak volumes without ornamentation.

The tone is measured, reflective, and deeply grounded — there is a humility here, an openness to ambiguity that actually strengthens the poem’s message. You present paradoxes not as problems, but as truths to be lived with, not solved.

There’s also a rhythmic clarity in the longer stanzas — the pacing simulates an unfolding conversation or inner monologue. This allows the reader to take the ideas in incrementally, which is ideal for processing such dense emotional content.


Why This Poem Matters

This poem matters because it tackles one of humanity’s most universal and inescapable experiences — the mystery of what happens after death — without sugar-coating, avoidance, or spiritual bypassing.

You’re addressing the intellectual discomfort that exists at the intersection of spiritual belief and emotional pain — and how clinging to illusions (even comforting ones) can stagnate our growth.

The lines about faith being a “cushion” are especially poignant — they offer a nuanced perspective: faith can be soothing, but it can also become resistance if used to dodge emotional truth. That’s not a message people often want to hear — which is precisely why it’s important.

This poem doesn’t reject faith, but it demands that faith be re-examined, renewed, and flexible — grounded in experience, not fantasy. It reminds us that life’s lessons are often earned the hard way, but can’t be sidestepped without cost.

Ultimately, the poem validates emotional evolution over rigid belief. It acknowledges how messy, contradictory, and beautiful our process of awakening really is.


Placement in the Collection

Faith fits beautifully into the mid-to-late section of the collection — especially after poems like Soul Contract or The True Role of the Ego.

It could also function well as a transitional piece between more esoteric/spiritual poems and those grounded in psychological or emotional realism. Its open-ended honesty makes it an excellent pivot between hope and hard-earned wisdom.

This piece also stands strong as a self-contained meditation — the kind of poem readers will want to return to after experiencing loss, spiritual disillusionment, or during times of deep introspection.


Final Thoughts

Faith is a courageously grounded poem. It doesn’t hide behind mysticism or escapism, and in doing so, it actually achieves a deeper kind of spirituality — one rooted in truth, impermanence, and emotional maturity.

Its core message — that surrender, presence, and open-mindedness are more useful than clinging to fixed beliefs — is a timeless and urgently relevant one.

It’s a poem for seekers, for skeptics, for believers in flux — and that is precisely why it belongs in the collection.


59. The Second Coming


Review of The Second Coming

Summary

The Second Coming is a rousing spiritual manifesto — not of apocalypse or judgment, but of awakening. It reclaims the prophetic tone of traditional religious language and reorients it toward conscious evolution and collective transformation. Rather than heralding a single saviour, this poem asserts that true salvation will come not through one figure, but through the mass unfolding of human potential.

The piece draws from spiritual, philosophical, and even metaphysical paradigms, yet remains grounded in the lived human experience — in our daily choices, responses, and interpersonal relationships.

Why This Poem Matters

In a time where global crises push us toward fear or disconnection, The Second Coming offers a hopeful alternative: that change is not only possible, but inevitable — and we each have a role to play.

The poet begins with a clear challenge to religious literalism:

“The second coming is not any one man / Or one woman / It is the explosion of collective consciousness”

This reframing is central to the poem’s power. It shifts the gaze from outer saviours to inner awakening, and from passivity to agency.

Key phrases like:

“When the ability to respond (response-able) / Is greater than to react”
“What one does to another / Actually, one does unto one’s own self”

…emphasise the transition from ego-driven separateness to a more compassionate, integrated way of being — an emotional intelligence that transcends reaction and cultivates accountability, empathy, and maturity.

The poem’s rhythm gathers momentum through the second half, building like a crescendo — a rising tide of possibility:

“Because the pain of staying the same / Will be greater than that of change”
“For it is humanity’s collective destiny / To evolve as a species / Beyond the comfort zone”

Here, we see a clear call to inner and outer revolution, grounded in healing — not dogma. The language blends metaphysical terms like “Primordial Qi” and “Source Energy” with spiritual archetypes: “inner god-goddess self,” “inner guru”, and “legendary inspirational role models” — grounding abstract ideas in relatable, accessible language.

The poet also names emotional evolution as core to the journey:

“How to love and accept the unloveable / Within the self / And each other”
“How to extend forgiveness, everyday!”

This is not utopian idealism, but practical spirituality — a daily discipline that trains the heart and mind to “align as one.” The reference to binary code“From an Off to an On / Like a chain of dominoes” — cleverly modernises the spiritual awakening as a systemic, viral upgrade to collective consciousness.

In Conclusion

The Second Coming is a poem of clarity, courage, and commitment. It reimagines salvation not as something we wait for, but something we participate in — actively, consciously, collectively. In this vision, everyone matters. No one is left behind.

With its grounded wisdom and visionary sweep, this poem encapsulates the underlying message of the collection: that personal healing and global transformation are not separate paths, but part of the same spiral of becoming.

This is poetry not just as art, but as invitation — to rise, awaken, and evolve.


✩ 38. Swim – Tate Britain


Come swim with me

Dive into my smile

Dance for a while

Allow yourself to be free…




Can’t you see

What you’re doing to me?

Stop, turn-around now and let go

Jump into the current

Go with the flow

Sweeping along effortlessly

Carries afloat…

Breathe calm and slow

Inhale the sweet taste

Of this present moment

Open your heart and fly!

Don’t waste precious time

Wondering why?



Feel real, right now!

Before it’s too late…

Before love fades

Pales into the dusty haze

Another faint sweet memory

Lost in the forgotten maze

Labyrinth of time

Washed away

By the undulating waves

Is but a moment, a droplet

In the ocean-of-eternity

Sea of doubt

Emotional tides of uncertainty

Enduring bondage of the mind…



Come swim with me

Dive into my smile

Dance for a while

Allow yourself to be free…


Review of “Swim” (Friday 4th February 2005)

“Swim” is an invitation — tender, urgent, and poetic — calling the reader into emotional surrender and present-moment awareness. Framed through the sensual imagery of water, movement, and breath, the poem becomes a metaphor for mindfulness: “Breathe calm and slow / Inhale the sweet taste / Of this present moment.”

The author juxtaposes the simplicity of joy — found in dancing, smiling, and being — with the melancholy reality of time’s passing. The fluidity of love and memory is reflected in the lines “Washed away / By the undulating waves,” reminding us that moments not fully lived may dissolve into forgetfulness. This is not just a romantic yearning, but a deeper call to presence — to “feel real, right now,” before life’s emotional tides carry us elsewhere.

The gentle refrain “Come swim with me / Dive into my smile” acts as both an invitation to love and a spiritual urging to return to now — where joy, connection, and freedom reside.

Summary:
“Swim” is more than a love poem — it is a meditation on impermanence and the importance of anchoring oneself in the present. The author uses water as a guiding symbol of emotional and spiritual flow, encouraging the release of resistance and the full embrace of what is.

Conclusion:
At once intimate and expansive, “Swim” reminds us that presence is the gateway to love, freedom, and self-realisation. This poem shimmers with quiet urgency — a soft, flowing wake-up call to live fully, now. ✩


This poem was written in 2005. In 2006/07 Swim was featured on a fundraising Compilation LP for Campaign Against Arms Trading, (CAAT) engineered by Oli Widdaker @ Blue Flower Studios. In November of 2008, I was invited to be a guest speaker for Late at Tate, at the screening of my Poetry Film for Swim (below). Swim is now in 2025 Swim is an uplifting dance / house track on my debut EP available from bandcamp.

4. Stop What You’re Doing!

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  • This poem is a contemplative and spiritually grounded reflection on the interconnection between the inner self and the external environment. Rooted in a holistic worldview, it offers a gentle yet profound meditation on the state of the Earth as a mirror of human consciousness.

    The poet presents the concept of Gaia not simply as a mythological figure, but as a living spirit residing within all individuals. This framing elevates the poem beyond environmental commentary, positioning it within a broader philosophical and spiritual context. The central assertion—that “what is within is reflected without”—forms the thematic spine of the piece and is handled with clarity and sincerity.

    The structure of the poem is spare and deliberate. The free verse form, coupled with short, measured lines, gives the work a meditative rhythm. Each line appears carefully placed to allow the reader space for reflection. This stylistic restraint enhances the contemplative tone and aligns with the poem’s themes of inner peace and environmental harmony.

    Linguistically, the poem is marked by clarity and economy. The diction is simple yet resonant, avoiding ornamentation in favour of direct expression. Phrases such as “self-love, -empowerment and -worth” display an innovative use of form that visually and rhythmically connects the ideas, suggesting their interdependence. The repetition of “self-” creates a quiet insistence on personal responsibility and healing as essential steps toward environmental stewardship.

    The poem’s closing lines underscore the idea that true ecological change begins within. There is a sense of calm resolve, and the final star symbol (“✩”) serves as a subtle visual coda—lightly echoing the cosmic or spiritual dimension underpinning the work.

    Overall, Environmental Awareness is a poised and sincere offering that succeeds in fusing ecological awareness with inner transformation. Its strength lies in its clarity, its contemplative tone, and its unwavering belief in the power of self-healing as a pathway to planetary renewal. The poet demonstrates both restraint and depth, producing a piece that is both timeless and quietly impactful.