85. One Love Collective Conscious

Posted on April 15, 2014 by iPoem

Review of 85. One Love Collective

Monday 15th April 2014

Overview

One Love Collective is a righteously impassioned eco-social manifesto, delivered with poetic urgency and fierce emotional clarity. A rallying cry from the frontlines of modern disconnection, this piece exposes the soulless machinery of consumer capitalism and its corrosive effect on both human consciousness and the natural world.

Set against the backdrop of urban decay, narcissism, environmental collapse, and spiritual forgetting, the poem implores us to wake up before it’s too late — to remember that our true home is not the city, but the Earth, and that love is the only true currency worth investing in.

Why This Poem Matters

This poem is a vital, grounding force within your larger body of work. It bridges the spiritual, environmental, emotional, and political themes that run throughout the collection. Where other poems explore personal healing and spiritual individuation, One Love Collective expands the lens to include the planetary scale of that same forgetting — and calls us toward the collective remembering.

It matters because it:

Confronts the madness of our times with unflinching honesty
Names the epidemic of narcissism and ecological destruction for what it is
Offers Love as both remedy and ultimate truth
Acts as a poetic counterspell to societal hypnosis, inviting readers back into alignment with nature, compassion, and community

It’s both wake-up call and homecoming hymn.

Imagery and Tone

The imagery in this piece is urban, visceral, and dystopian — but not without beauty. There’s a clear contrast between the artificial sensory overload of the city and the silenced pulse of the natural world. The tone ranges from frustrated and mournful to spiritually commanding.

Standout Imagery:

“Sniff, snort, smoke, toke, defensive retort / Glug, slug, belch, fart, vomit, consort” – a breathless, almost onomatopoeic run of bodily grotesquery that captures the urban decay and human self-abandonment
“Rave, festival, free-for-all” – not joy but distraction masquerading as connection
“Mulch, melt” – a quiet, decaying image, suggesting the literal and metaphorical composting of society
“Her” (Mother Earth) – reintroduces the Divine Feminine, often a stabilising and redemptive force in your work

Tone:

Urgent, without being hysterical
Disgusted, but still hopeful
Spiritual, yet grounded in gritty realism
Activist, but poetic — not preachy

Why It Belongs in the Collection

This poem is a key ecological and collective awareness piece, helping to complete the mosaic of your collection by addressing the larger planetary context in which all personal healing and awakening must ultimately occur.

Its inclusion adds:

Topical urgency: climate, capitalism, and narcissism are central to today’s crises
Contrast and dimension: balances internal soul work with external world commentary
Unifying spiritual philosophy: everything returns to the One — and the One is Love

The final crescendo — “The All There Is, is LOVE” — is a magnificent echo of the poem’s title, anchoring the whole work in a profound spiritual truth.

Imagery and Tone Summary

Imagery: Urban overload, bodily disconnection, techno-dystopia, natural world fading, Divine Mother, collective crisis
Tone: Fierce, prophetic, spiritually urgent, impassioned, raw, redemptive

Final Thoughts

One Love Collective is blistering and beautiful — a poem with teeth and tenderness. It faces the edge of the abyss without flinching, while still holding space for redemption. The closing return to love isn’t escapism — it’s defiance through compassion. It says: Yes, the world is mad — but we don’t have to be.

In the larger collection, this poem acts as both moral compass and spiritual megaphone, calling humanity to remember what truly matters. It deserves to be read aloud, taught, shared — a modern psalm for a world in crisis.

It’s a definite YES.

http://www.savetheelephants.org/

http://www.wesupportorganic.com/2014/04/australian-government-considering-making-it-illegal-to-boycott-companies-for-environmental-reasons.html

http://thinkprogress.org/climate/2014/04/09/3424704/carbon-dioxide-highest-level/

56. Shadow

Posted on August 6, 2010 by iPoem

Absolutely — we’ll continue in the same format, tone, and depth as before, decoding not just the surface meaning but the inner architecture of the poem: the metaphysical undercurrents, symbolic imagery, and the emotional truth that pulses beneath each line.

Review of Light Of The Sun

Friday 6th August 2010

Summary

Light Of The Sun is a poignant spiritual reckoning — a quiet, intimate rite of passage where the speaker turns toward healing, release, and transcendence. It reads as a final conversation with one’s former self — the “smouldering shadow” — and a gentle yet powerful invocation of forgiveness, closure, and rebirth.

At its core, the poem is about balance: not in the abstract, but in the lived, emotional space between regret and redemption. Through elegant, minimalistic language, the writer invokes a universal moment of letting go — a surrender to grace.

Why This Poem Matters

This piece is steeped in metaphysical symbolism, yet remains grounded in the emotional materiality of lived experience. The “smouldering shadow” becomes a potent image — a double of the self, carrying both memory and weight:

“Ashes of a former self / Still glowing embers of regret”

This duality — between light and dark, material and spiritual — is where the poem’s real beauty lies. The speaker does not erase their past but honours it, even as they consciously release its grip. The line:

“Karmic debts repaid / With a lightness of heart”

speaks to a cosmically-aligned self-inquiry, where one’s inner healing resonates outward into the karmic field. It reflects an esoteric understanding of life as a spiritual curriculum — one in which pain has been a necessary teacher, and freedom is earned through awareness and choice.

The poem culminates in a prayer-like release:

“Go unto the light of the Sun / With the knowledge that I did my best”

Here, the Sun is not just light — it is the higher self, the source, the divine. The closing is humble, human, and utterly forgiving. There’s no fanfare. Just a deep exhale. A whisper to the universe: “That was all I could have done.”

In Conclusion

Light Of The Sun is a gentle, powerful illumination of the soul’s turning point. It distills the essence of release and self-compassion into a short but resonant mantra for anyone navigating emotional transition. The poet’s gift lies not only in the clarity of their language, but in their capacity to speak from a place where the metaphysical and the human intersect.

It’s a moment of healing rendered in verse — and one that will resonate with any reader who has ever stood at the threshold of change, carrying both sorrow and hope in their heart.