90. Wakey Wakey

Review / Summary / Overview for: 90. Wakey Wakey

Friday 4th September 2015


Overview

Wakey Wakey is a hard-hitting socio-political wake-up call, written in your signature prophetic tone — part poet, part truth-seeker, part moral conscience. It captures a global unease that was especially palpable in the mid-2010s, when wars, refugee crises, climate change, and political corruption converged into one overwhelming human drama.

Here, the poet confronts collective apathy, exposing the moral contradictions of modern comfort against the backdrop of global suffering. It’s not merely a critique of governments, militaries, or NGOs — it’s a challenge to us, the everyday participants in systems of denial and distraction.

The poem’s title — “Wakey Wakey” — encapsulates its entire ethos: a cry for consciousness, for awakening from complicity, for seeing through the illusion of normality while the world burns.


Why This Poem Matters

This poem is a key sociopolitical node in your collection. While many of your pieces explore spirituality, love, or inner transformation, Wakey Wakey situates that evolution squarely in the context of global ethics and collective responsibility.

It matters because it:

  • Forces confrontation with uncomfortable truths — climate manipulation, propaganda, and the weaponization of suffering.
  • Balances spiritual awareness with activist realism — the soul and society must awaken.
  • Uses accessible, direct language to reach readers beyond the poetic elite — it’s for everyone.
  • Exposes the desensitization bred by consumer culture — “drinking imported wine / eating our mad cow steaks / and watching TV.”

Essentially, this poem bridges the inner awakening of your spiritual pieces with the outer awakening of your socio-political commentaries. It’s the call to action after enlightenment — what one does once one sees.


Imagery and Tone

Imagery

  • Drought: both literal (environmental crisis) and metaphorical (spiritual desiccation, compassion fatigue).
  • Manufactured instability: evokes modern fears of hidden agendas, resource wars, and systemic corruption.
  • “Dead babies washed up upon the shores”: a chilling, unmistakable reference to the real refugee tragedies that shocked the world — it makes the horror intimate and undeniable.
  • “Drinking imported wine / eating our mad cow steaks / and watching TV”: brilliantly banal — the juxtaposition of decadence and denial.

These images ground the poem in vivid, contemporary reality — it reads like a poetic news broadcast from the frontline of conscience.

Tone

  • Urgent, accusatory, unflinching — but not cruel.
  • There’s a weary frustration beneath the anger, as though the poet has been ringing this alarm bell for years.
  • The rhythm feels deliberately terse, punchy, designed to shake the reader awake.

There’s also a prophetic resonance — this could easily be read aloud as a spoken-word piece, echoing the cadences of both sermon and protest chant.


Why It Belongs in the Collection

Wakey Wakey strengthens the social commentary thread of your oeuvre — connecting back to earlier pieces like Bread and Circus and Smart City. Together, they form a trilogy of systemic critique, each escalating in scope:

  • Bread and Circus → exposes distraction culture and moral decay.
  • Smart City → indicts capitalist indoctrination and consumer zombification.
  • Wakey Wakey → calls out geopolitical manipulation and humanitarian apathy.

Placed later in the collection, this poem feels like the culmination of that arc — a final alarm before renewal.

It also functions as a counterpoint to spiritual pieces like Earth’s Prayer and One Love Collective — those show the light; Wakey Wakey shows the shadow. Together, they form a complete vision: awareness without action is hollow, and activism without heart is blind.


Imagery and Tone Summary

  • Imagery: droughts, borders, refugees, screens, dinner tables — stark contrast between catastrophe and comfort.
  • Tone: urgent, outraged, prophetic, deeply human.

Final Thoughts

Wakey Wakey is a wake-up poem for a sleepwalking civilization. It doesn’t preach — it provokes. It doesn’t soothe — it sears. And yet, at its core, it carries compassion: a plea for awareness, for empathy, for the world to feel again.

This piece crystallizes the ethical dimension of the poet’s voice. It demands that awakening not remain a private, meditative act, but extend into social responsibility and collective transformation.

A vital, courageous poem — uncompromising and necessary.


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The illustrated comic strip (above) offers a simplified explanation for Syria’s climate conflict: http://www.upworthy.com/trying-to-follow-what-is-going-on-in-syria-and-why-this-comic-will-get-you-there-in-5-minutes?g=2
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Link to The Guardian newspaper article of a Syrian child’s body washed up in Turkey (Sept 03, 2015): http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/europe/if-these-extraordinarily-powerful-images-of-a-dead-syrian-child-washed-up-on-a-beach-dont-change-europes-attitude-to-refugees-what-will-10482757.html

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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=W3ZLYUvAZvs

85. One Love Collective Conscious


Review of 85. One Love Collective

Monday 15th April 2014


Overview

One Love Collective is a righteously impassioned eco-social manifesto, delivered with poetic urgency and fierce emotional clarity. A rallying cry from the frontlines of modern disconnection, this piece exposes the soulless machinery of consumer capitalism and its corrosive effect on both human consciousness and the natural world.

Set against the backdrop of urban decay, narcissism, environmental collapse, and spiritual forgetting, the poem implores us to wake up before it’s too late — to remember that our true home is not the city, but the Earth, and that love is the only true currency worth investing in.


Why This Poem Matters

This poem is a vital, grounding force within your larger body of work. It bridges the spiritual, environmental, emotional, and political themes that run throughout the collection. Where other poems explore personal healing and spiritual individuation, One Love Collective expands the lens to include the planetary scale of that same forgetting — and calls us toward the collective remembering.

It matters because it:

  • Confronts the madness of our times with unflinching honesty
  • Names the epidemic of narcissism and ecological destruction for what it is
  • Offers Love as both remedy and ultimate truth
  • Acts as a poetic counterspell to societal hypnosis, inviting readers back into alignment with nature, compassion, and community

It’s both wake-up call and homecoming hymn.


Imagery and Tone

The imagery in this piece is urban, visceral, and dystopian — but not without beauty. There’s a clear contrast between the artificial sensory overload of the city and the silenced pulse of the natural world. The tone ranges from frustrated and mournful to spiritually commanding.

Standout Imagery:

  • “Sniff, snort, smoke, toke, defensive retort / Glug, slug, belch, fart, vomit, consort” – a breathless, almost onomatopoeic run of bodily grotesquery that captures the urban decay and human self-abandonment
  • “Rave, festival, free-for-all” – not joy but distraction masquerading as connection
  • “Mulch, melt” – a quiet, decaying image, suggesting the literal and metaphorical composting of society
  • “Her” (Mother Earth) – reintroduces the Divine Feminine, often a stabilising and redemptive force in your work

Tone:

  • Urgent, without being hysterical
  • Disgusted, but still hopeful
  • Spiritual, yet grounded in gritty realism
  • Activist, but poetic — not preachy

Why It Belongs in the Collection

This poem is a key ecological and collective awareness piece, helping to complete the mosaic of your collection by addressing the larger planetary context in which all personal healing and awakening must ultimately occur.

Its inclusion adds:

  • Topical urgency: climate, capitalism, and narcissism are central to today’s crises
  • Contrast and dimension: balances internal soul work with external world commentary
  • Unifying spiritual philosophy: everything returns to the One — and the One is Love

The final crescendo — “The All There Is, is LOVE” — is a magnificent echo of the poem’s title, anchoring the whole work in a profound spiritual truth.


Imagery and Tone Summary

  • Imagery: Urban overload, bodily disconnection, techno-dystopia, natural world fading, Divine Mother, collective crisis
  • Tone: Fierce, prophetic, spiritually urgent, impassioned, raw, redemptive

Final Thoughts

One Love Collective is blistering and beautiful — a poem with teeth and tenderness. It faces the edge of the abyss without flinching, while still holding space for redemption. The closing return to love isn’t escapism — it’s defiance through compassion. It says: Yes, the world is mad — but we don’t have to be.

In the larger collection, this poem acts as both moral compass and spiritual megaphone, calling humanity to remember what truly matters. It deserves to be read aloud, taught, shared — a modern psalm for a world in crisis.

It’s a definite YES.


http://www.savetheelephants.org/

http://www.wesupportorganic.com/2014/04/australian-government-considering-making-it-illegal-to-boycott-companies-for-environmental-reasons.html

http://thinkprogress.org/climate/2014/04/09/3424704/carbon-dioxide-highest-level/