28. Emolution


Review of Emolution (Saturday 30th September 2000)

Emolution is a contemplative and nuanced exploration of spiritual awakening, personal sovereignty, and the transformative power of love, framed through a brief but potent interaction between the poet and a modern-day evangelist figure. The poem invites reflection on faith, myth, and individual experience, weaving theological motifs with a distinctly contemporary and personal lens.

The poem begins with an anecdote—an encounter with a “gospel-Jesus-taxi-guy” who quotes a profound biblical assertion:

“I Am The Way and The Light”

This immediate invocation of Christ’s famous self-description situates the poem in the tension between traditional religious narrative and personal spiritual inquiry. The poet’s resistance to conversion is telling—not rejection of spirituality per se, but an openness that is tempered by individual discernment:

“I resisted being converted
But the debate was highly interesting”

This sets a tone of respectful skepticism, allowing the poem to navigate the complex space between inherited belief systems and contemporary personal spirituality.

The poet then delves deeper into the essence of what Jesus (whether as historical figure, myth, or archetype) represents:

“If JC really did exist
Then he must have been way ahead of the curve”

Here, the poem situates Jesus not merely as religious icon but as a timeless exemplar of self-realization and inner connection. This idea that walking with Jesus is “choosing to walk in the Presence of Love” transforms the external figure into an invitation toward an internal process:

“He lives on, resurrected within
As a shining example of one’s own true potential”

This shift from external salvation to internal awakening is central to the poem’s thesis. The qualities attributed to this resurrected presence—power without control, strength without force, humility without weakness, faith without doubt, love without conditions—embody a sacred masculinity that is balanced, authentic, and aligned with spiritual integrity.

The poem’s title, Emolution, cleverly combines “emotion” and “evolution,” signaling an ongoing inner transformation driven by heartfelt experience. This theme blossoms further with a visionary appeal to collective awakening:

“Imagine ten, twenty, fifty enlightened good men
In full activation of their divine sacred masculine
Co-operating in partnership
With the divine sacred feminine”

This vision of balance and partnership extends from the personal to the global, suggesting that spiritual emancipation is not only possible but inevitable through the collective activation of divine masculine and feminine energies. It underscores the poem’s deeply hopeful and activist undercurrent—a call to spiritual revolution grounded in love and authentic power.

The concluding lines affirm the importance of personal agency and individual pathways:

“But whatever works for you
Or gets you through
And is a uniquely personal one-to-one.”

This acknowledgment reinforces the poem’s inclusive and non-dogmatic stance. It honors the diversity of spiritual experience, while emphasizing the core truth that awakening is fundamentally an intimate, personal journey.

Stylistically, Emolution is characterized by conversational clarity and a gentle flow that mirrors the unfolding of thought. The absence of formal punctuation and the free verse structure allow ideas to cascade organically, reflecting the fluidity of spiritual inquiry and emotional evolution.


Conclusion

Emolution is a heartfelt and open meditation on faith, identity, and transformation. Through a small encounter with a charismatic messenger, the poet opens a door into larger questions about divine potential, inner sovereignty, and the synergy between sacred masculine and feminine energies. The poem’s gentle call to imagine a world awakened to love and balance offers a quiet but powerful invitation to walk one’s unique spiritual path with courage and authenticity.

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27. Ablutions of Humanity


Review of Ablutions of Humanity (Wednesday 13th September 2000)

Ablutions of Humanity is a meditative, eco-spiritual reflection that interweaves inner awareness with planetary consciousness, offering a deeply intuitive reading of the reciprocal relationship between human emotion and the natural world. Set on the shorelines of Manly Beach, this poem marks a turning point in the poet’s work — one where personal insight becomes inextricably linked with planetary healing, and where the act of observation gives way to a sense of cosmic responsibility.

The poem begins in a moment of personal stillness, with the poet standing beside the ocean, lost in thought:

“Yesterday, whilst standing by the ocean
On Manly Beach, absorbed in my thoughts…”

This quiet prelude immediately establishes a contemplative atmosphere. But what follows is not simply poetic reverie. The poet’s experience soon turns into a subtle experiment — a real-time observation of how her inner landscape appears to influence the ocean’s outward expression. She notes a mysterious, almost mystical correlation between her thoughts and the behaviour of the waves:

“I definitely observed
That the waves were responding to me!”

This intuitive insight becomes the foundation for the poem’s central thesis: that human thought and emotional resonance are not isolated phenomena but vibrationally entangled with the Earth’s own energetic systems. The ocean becomes both a metaphor and a literal participant — a responsive mirror to human consciousness, capable of reflecting inner turbulence or calm. Such an idea recalls indigenous cosmologies, animist beliefs, and holistic paradigms of interconnectedness, in which land, water, and sky are living beings — sentient and responsive to human intention.

At the heart of the poem lies the idea of the planet as a spiritual processor:

“For the Earth is constantly absorbing
All our fearful impulses, traumas and dramas…”

The poet articulates a metaphysical ecology in which the Earth, particularly its waters, functions like a collective emotional sponge — an energetic sink for humanity’s unresolved shadow. This idea deepens with references to:

“the saline oceans,” “ions and electrons,”

and marine life like whales and dolphins, cast here not merely as animals but as custodians of vibrational harmony:

“With their global sonar communications
Frequency oscillations…”

These lines position marine life as participants in a planetary healing mechanism, echoing spiritual traditions and pseudoscientific beliefs that propose sound, vibration, and frequency as fundamental to universal balance. Through this, the poet elegantly fuses environmental awareness with energy healing, quantum resonance, and intuitive science — what could be called eco-energetic mysticism.

The poem’s title, Ablutions of Humanity, becomes a sacred metaphor. “Ablution” — meaning ritual washing or purification — frames the ocean not just as a geographical feature but as a global organ of spiritual cleansing. The ocean is portrayed as a healer, working in silent cooperation to harmonise the psychological and emotional waste that humans, often unconsciously, release. This concept is reminiscent of ancient purification rites, but rendered here on a planetary scale — an idea that draws from both esoteric traditions and postmodern ecological spirituality.

A particularly compelling strength of the poem is how it traces the link between the metaphysical and the material. Emotional disconnection is not only a spiritual issue but, as the poet suggests, manifests tangibly in ecological disturbance:

“The more negativity we put out
The more we perceive as disease
Or natural disasters…”

This culminates in the invocation of cause and effect, Hoʻoponopono, and the Butterfly Effect, drawing together Hawaiian spiritual philosophy, chaos theory, and karmic law. These frameworks are employed not as abstract concepts but as living systems of understanding — ways to interpret the world’s volatility not as randomness, but as response.

Stylistically, the poem flows with the rhythm of waves — undulating between personal confession, scientific reference, and metaphysical declaration. The language remains accessible, yet rich with meaning, mirroring the very dynamic it describes: the movement from inner thought to outer reflection. It also continues the poet’s practice of extended free verse as a vessel for consciousness-stream writing — capturing ideas in motion rather than locking them into rigid stanzas.

The final stanza anchors the message with clarity and urgency:

“Our very real and tangible contributions
Towards these occurrences
Which are merely reflections
Of our own spiritual disconnection…”

In these lines, the poet doesn’t merely lament environmental degradation but calls for spiritual reconnection — not just with the Earth, but with one’s own emotions, choices, and relationships. The poem thus becomes a ritual of remembrance, reconnecting the personal with the planetary.


Conclusion

Ablutions of Humanity is a luminous meditation on the entanglement of inner and outer worlds. Merging poetic intuition with spiritual ecology, the poem asserts that healing the Earth begins with healing the self — and that the waves we see in the ocean may well begin with ripples in the heart. Through its quiet observations and cosmic implications, the poem invites us to live more consciously, to see nature not as backdrop but as mirror, and to understand that our emotional weather may well shape the climate of the world.

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