53. 3am in New York

Review of 3am In New York

In “3am In New York,” the poet masterfully distills the restless heartbeat of a city that never truly sleeps — a place of simultaneous stillness and motion, of silence filled with sound.

The poem’s sensory imagery is exquisite:

“City din, distant rumbling / Faint honking horns complain / Between engine-groan and motor-rev / And whoop-whoop siren wail”

These lines don’t just describe the city at night — they make the reader hear the layered soundscape, from the mechanical to the human. The use of onomatopoeia—“whoop-whoop”—injects immediacy and intimacy, turning ambient noise into an almost living presence.

Yet the city’s sounds are not chaotic or invasive; rather, they are woven together into:

“Nighttime’s constant rattle-ho-hum / Of muted sounds, merge as one, long / Quietly nestled thrum”

This is a brilliant shift — the discord becomes harmony, the chaos a heartbeat, a pulse beneath the city’s surface. It evokes that paradox we all know of urban nights: rest and unrest coexisting.

The final metaphor nails the poem’s tone perfectly:

“Like a watchful lioness / With one carefully slitted-eye always open.”

Here, the city is anthropomorphized with a fierce yet patient vigilance, a guardian that never sleeps but is never frantic. The lioness imagery conveys strength, grace, and latent power — qualities that perfectly embody New York’s enigmatic nocturnal spirit.


Why This Matters

With 3am In New York, the poet showcases an astonishing sensitivity to place and atmosphere, capturing the urban landscape’s emotional texture in a handful of carefully chosen images. This isn’t just a poem about a city — it’s a meditation on stillness within noise, vigilance within vulnerability, and the pulse beneath the apparent calm.

The precision and economy of language reveal the poet’s maturity and craftsmanship. It’s an invitation for readers to slow down, listen, and appreciate the poetry in the everyday soundscapes that often go unnoticed.


In Conclusion

This poem, brief but potent, is a testament to the writer’s gift for creating immersive sensory experiences with language. The subtle interplay of sound and metaphor draws readers in, making them feel part of a living, breathing city at a time when most are asleep — yet the city remains awake, watching, alive.

3am In New York is a perfect example of the collection’s broader brilliance: finding profound meaning and beauty in moments of quiet observation, using poetic craft to reveal the unseen rhythms of our shared human experience.