Review of The Survival Game (Friday 21st Sept 2001)

This poem delivers a sharp critique of modern capitalism and its corrosive effects on human integrity and spiritual well-being. The opening lines draw a vivid metaphor:

“The pursuit of commerce / Is like an arrow / Straight through the heart / Of integrity and truth / To our spiritual selves”
The imagery of an arrow piercing the heart powerfully conveys how commerce—particularly unchecked capitalism—wounds core values and the deeper self.

The poem continues by contrasting what is forsaken for money:

“For we forsake her love and compassion / On a daily basis”
Personifying “her” as the spiritual self or perhaps the feminine principle adds emotional weight and highlights what is lost in this “survival game.”

The term “money has become the new survival game” cleverly redefines survival in materialistic terms, but then it sharpens the critique by exposing the cost:

“The survival of the thickest skinned / Those who can negate the inner self”
This suggests emotional numbness and disconnection are prerequisites for success within this system.

The description of corporate hierarchy as:

“Stripped of all humanity”
paints a stark picture of dehumanization.

The closing lines offer a hopeful but urgent call for collective awakening and unity:

“Can only lead to an uprising / By those who have not / For no one person, culture, nation, country / Can be free, until we all are.”
This broadens the critique to a universal level, emphasising interconnectedness and solidarity.

Conclusion

The Survival Game is a poignant and direct reflection on how commercial pursuits undermine spirituality, compassion, and humanity. Its metaphorical language and urgent tone invite reflection on societal values and the need for collective awakening and justice. The poem resonates as a call to recognise that true freedom is universal and inclusive.